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I Gotta Get a Ride, Yeah!
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Monday, January 13, 2003
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I want a real ride, yeah,
gotta take a real ride,
take-me-out-of-my-mind ride,
yeah, outta my blind mind,
yeah, I gotta get a ride...

(I can manage...
speeding off, into
freedom, passenger
to blazing poetic freeways,
mind's breathtaking sunsets
of rhyme, and season.)

I need a ride, yeah,
gotta take a real ride,
bike-between-my-legs ride,
yeah, outta my blind life,
yeah, I gotta get a ride...

(I can manage...
the crash of planes,
into my spirit’s heart,
not well, but I set it
on it’s own road, to
keep it off the soul’s load.)

I need a ride, yeah,
gotta take a real ride,
wind-driven-tears ride,
yeah, get outta my blind-side,
yeah, I gotta get a ride...

(I can’t manage...
the weight of hate,
into my family’s life,
so I teach them to love
true road to the soul,
and respect for the whole.)

I need a ride, yeah,
gotta take a real ride,
leather-wearing-pride ride,
yeah, too fleeting to be blind,
yeah, I gotta get a ride...

Gotta get a ride...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/1/02 

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 12/20/2003
Enjoyed this Erin. I've been thinking about you, truly, just gettting here though. do thoughts count? Anyway can I ride with you, think I will, lets go. I haven't been on a bike for years. have a great holiday. love G
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) 1/22/2003
gotta get me one of those too! wild ride! **Mari**
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/20/2003
(((erin))) whatta rush! whatta ride! love the intensity of this write...thought at first you were talkin' about the newest rollercoaster cedar point's building...the 420 foot tall, 120 mile an hour (IN four seconds) NUTTY coaster...i am nuts 'bout coasters, but this one is a whole lot past insane!! 120 in four seconds...that will rip your face off!! LOL a motorcycle ride seems perfectly sane after thinkin' about "top thrill dragster" LOL! (((HUGS))) and stay safe! (wear your helmet--one of my dear friends was t-boned while riding his bike, the ONLY thing that saved him was his helmet...he still had brain damage and a whole lot of physical damage, but at least he can walk and talk!! not GREAT, but he's gettin' around, God bless 'im!) love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 1/13/2003
Loved it could just imagine it be an award winning song.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/13/2003
Makes me want to buy a motorbike. I just might.......I have the leathers :-) Good write.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/13/2003
If I ranted too could I ride with you cause I gotta get a ride too;-) love it!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 1/13/2003
Yes this is very good Erin. free!!!!!!
Reviewed by J John (Reader) 1/13/2003
Very expressive :) great read ... j
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 1/13/2003
You know i still think i have a transfer ticket from a bus ride i took
i will give it to you if it helps
Just don't sit next to the fat man with B/O
Reviewed by Oisín Breen 1/13/2003
I like it its got pace and wildness. Sounds more like a song to me though. A velvet underground song in the vein of anything except poor waldo on white light white heat perhaps the excellent sister ray's style would suit it. Great
Reviewed by Oisín Breen 1/13/2003
girl, I can relate...nothing like that ride
Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) 1/13/2003
Excellent write Erin!
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 1/13/2003
Need a traveling buddy?????? Sticks out her thumb.....for a ride.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 1/13/2003
I got to catch a plane and would prefer to catch a ride. You got me ready with this.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/13/2003
Can feel the restless joy!!
Reviewed by anne cunningham 1/13/2003
agreed ... this is an energy-driven rant ...what's in your coffee this morning erin?!?!?
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 1/13/2003
Erin,

This is a rant packed with energy! The flow of this is moving!!!

Your rants are a pleasure to read!

Hugs,
Maria
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