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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
1/21/2003 |
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I understand the feeling, but maintain my optimism, and will continue to work towards turning this scenario around... it is ALMOST too late, but it isn't over until it's over... I will fight on for peace, justice,
stewardship - for all children of this world are entitled to better than this... |
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| Reviewed by Amy |
1/21/2003 |
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Work on the meter. The rhyme is okay, but the meter will pull it together.
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
1/21/2003 |
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| Well Zack ... you seem pretty definite on this. Must make your days and nights hell. Bill Murray |
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