*****The purpose of rain*****
Rain, the sweet life,
That crops, crave,
As, I crave, for love,
Or my heart, will break.
Rainbows, bursting colors,
Flowers, sipping dew,
Ground soaked, muddy waters,
Raging rapids, down the valley,
Water falls, standing still,
frozen in time,
Drought, dust, tumble weeds,
Arid, hot, sand storms,
Blue skies, dry riverbeds.
Thirst, low reservoirs,
Hunger, famine, starving,
Grass burning, animals dying,
All craving, the nectar of lfe,
By: William Bonilla......3/06/02
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|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Beautiful, William! Refreshing and "wet"! :)|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is wonderful with beautiful imagery.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Exceptional! Such wonderful imagery.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|it is rain here where i am right now.......what a fantastic write...
|Reviewed by g g (Reader)
|Beautiful imagery I love this
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|This is beautiful and <sigh> so dreamy for us nature lovers! Love like rain will also find a way!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
William ... remember the very old "Johnny Ray" song: "Just A Walking In The Rain."
That song goes way way back. For some reason your poem triggered that memory. bill murray
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Awesome is the perfect
word for this one...
Thanks for your kind
comments on mine...
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|William...what a fantastic write....thanks for sharing...this is lovely...love n luck...BHUWAN|