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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
2/9/2003 |
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| This was a lovely sentiment, well expressed! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
2/9/2003 |
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| This is awesome Sue... a dream not remembered that left tears perhaps? Floria |
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| Reviewed by Morchuis |
2/9/2003 |
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Hi hessy you miserable old granny, I did a poem for you, or is that what made you cry.
Big smile.-----Morchuis |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/9/2003 |
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| Nice write. Tear free mornings... what a wonderful thought. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/9/2003 |
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| very creative... |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
2/8/2003 |
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| good work |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
2/8/2003 |
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| how sweet taht is such an uplifitng way to lok at the world i am in awe at how much brighter the world seems throughyour eyes you are a beautiful poet now if only i could spell better great job on this poem !!!!! |
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| Reviewed by April Pittman |
2/8/2003 |
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Quaint but very sweet. The flow changed a little awkwardly but thats just my opinion. On the whole I thought it was pretty good. Keep it up.
April |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/8/2003 |
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| Sue, u should write more. |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
2/8/2003 |
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Very emotional Sue, feels good to let things out.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/8/2003 |
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| Very deep and emotional write..perfect. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/8/2003 |
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Good write Sue! Never let a bad dream gets you down, always look forward to a great day ahead.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/8/2003 |
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Sue, your cleansing tears washed away your fears and you awoke refreshed and feeling like today is worth living. Sometimes hon our dreams help us solve problems we aern't even aware exist. And this is good, for our burden in life can get too heavy to bear, and without this release who knows what would happen? I am happy for you and happy you write and bring me your thoughts and ideas; so that I can know you a little better each time. Your goofy friend always.
Bill xxo hugs |
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