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Bars Can't Hold Love
by Linda M Hill

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Door closed behind me
Locked up tight
Oh, how I miss you
Little one tonight.
I can see your big blue eyes
Smiling up at me
Or handing me a drawing
You want me to see.
A bounce in your step
As you skip along
Oh little one, I wish
I had never done wrong.


Sad faces stare through
The emptiness and pain
Eyes void of reason
Living in vain.
Little one, I think of
You so many miles away
Outside in your sandbox
So hard at play.
You don't remember your Dad,
But I remember you
What a miracle you were
With your eyes of blue.


I got in with the wrong crowd
I lost all I own
Every letter to you comes
Back address unknown.
The bars of steel is colder
Than ice in a storm
Little one, I pray you are
Safe and you are warm.
One day I will find you
Hold you close to me
You are my everything
My little girl of three.


I will miss so much of your
Growing up years
I wish I could be there to
Dry your many tears.
I have a photo of you
Its faded and worn
I can see your pretty face
Though the edges are torn.
Every nite I dream of you
Every nite I cry
Every nite my heart aches for you
Sometimes I want to die...


Door closed behind me
Locked up tight
Oh, how I miss you
Little one tonite...


Linda Hill 2002
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Reviewed by Birdie Houston 2/27/2003
moving, sad but good write
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 2/11/2003
I'm glad you reposted this one. It's simply beautiful.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/11/2003
sad, heartbreaking write! well done, linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :(
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 2/11/2003
Wonderful words of a poet with a lot of heart. Beautiful write Linda.
Jack
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 2/11/2003
Linda,
so touching
emotional
peg
Reviewed by Lori Moore 2/11/2003
Beautiful write. Sad, emotional, touching. This one will remain with me for a while.
Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com 2/11/2003
Linda,

This is so beautiful and so sad. To many people wind up losing everything over their own selfishness. Once they lose it they find it's to late and can never get it back. So sad...

God bless,
Tim
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 2/11/2003
Linda this is such a heartfelt write...wonderfull...from the soul...I felt every word..Floria
PS I am sure bills reply below was done in error..he would never do that..
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 2/11/2003
This was so sad and touching it is so hard for some fathers who go to jail to know that thier children are growing up without them i know someone who went through that and he to this day regrets going there this is a powerful write you did an excellent job Im only confused why someone is talking about their post in y0ours that to me is rude!!!!!! I sorry I loved this poem you are so talented I hope to be reading even more soon :)
Reviewed by Nancy D. 2/11/2003
Outstanding truth but so sad. Super write Linda.
Nancy
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 2/11/2003
10/10....perfect my friend...wow.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 2/11/2003
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Reviewed by Bill Murray (author) 2/11/2003

Just a little extra to this song. It is based on real life, not only for what has happened at the AD, but what happened in my childhood over a half century ago. This is a down home Hank Williams shit kicker. My Mother who I have just been able to reconcile my feelings toward ... in many ways fit Ruby Diamonds. She was an alcoholic and could not stay away from the bars. I used to dance in the barroom as a young child and the drunks threw money on the floor. Momma couldn't help it, and at this moment I am crying cause I was ashamed of her and would not stand up for her. My Step Father was very brutal and used to beat her and kick her with his steel toed miners boots. One time he even stabbed her. Momma
wound up in a mental hospital with a wet
brain. Oh Momma please forgive me. I was so
wrong to do this. I love you Momma. Billy
...........................................
Extra marital affairs ... at least so
they say ... are based on lack of
romance in the home. We who become
involved believe this. And in many
cases this is true. Sometimes, a
partner who has led a healthy, vigorous
sex life finds that for either physical
or mental reasons or both, the physical
love stops at home. The song is
titled: "Ruby Diamonds", but it could
have just as easily been titled: "Bill
Diamonds." And the song is not just
about one person ... but applies to
many, many people at the AD.
BARS HELD ME FOR MANY YEARS AND ELINATED ANY
CHANCE FOR LOVE.
..........................................
NOW THE BARS ARE NOT VISIBLE AND I CAN'T FIGHT MY WAY THROUGH THEM.





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