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back in the rain
by Steve Patterson

Thursday, February 13, 2003

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i'm back in the rain
can't seem ta' gain
any ground.

can't help but hear the sound
of what i lost &
what once i'd found.

i'm back in the rain.
feelin' the strain
of losin' you.

feelin' the pain
of lovin' you.

i'm back in the rain.

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Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 2/13/2003
Wonderful Write ... Losing it again its really sad and more sad and i know what lose are and what it can give ... Hey steve .. be happy ......

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 2/13/2003
Sad again Steven. Your poems are inspiring and meancholy at the same time.
love and peace,
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/13/2003
Oh this is so sad Steve!.....Great write with good emotional display!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Oisín Breen 2/13/2003
Its very nice and its sweet but i think somehow you are rhyming forceably. If you feel rhyme let it loose like a jazz musician. If you don't play tight. Keep up the work though your good. :)
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 2/13/2003
always a great poet you shine with your southern style its a great poem truly
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