|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Wonderful Write ... Losing it again its really sad and more sad and i know what lose are and what it can give ... Hey steve .. be happy ......
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Sad again Steven. Your poems are inspiring and meancholy at the same time.
love and peace,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Oh this is so sad Steve!.....Great write with good emotional display!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|Its very nice and its sweet but i think somehow you are rhyming forceably. If you feel rhyme let it loose like a jazz musician. If you don't play tight. Keep up the work though your good. :)|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|always a great poet you shine with your southern style its a great poem truly|