|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Wow.. great write...could feel the emotions pouring out...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|cold wind blowing through
the stubble field drifting snow
brings memories of
the last time that we spoke snow
drifting from the telephone
Happy Valentine To You
"cutie you on Bio"
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Oustanding tanka..it catches the emotion perfectly.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Short and sweet. Tanka You. Bill|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|I love this it's so very unique.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Sad but true write..stunning write!!!|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Sad but so beautiful. Thanks.
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Sad but very well thought out poem.|
|Reviewed by Sally Odgers
|Um - ouch!