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| Reviewed by Debbie Lacy |
10/6/2012 |
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Oh yes, I couldn't walk alone in the eerie darkness! Great poem Marilyn! Thanks for the share.
Debbie
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| Reviewed by me |
2/27/2003 |
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| interesting but very dark |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
2/23/2003 |
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| this was a little on the dark and scary side something we dont often see from a sweet person like you and taht is what makes this poem so awesome and amazing great job on this one |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/23/2003 |
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Incredible poetry
I like the new dolphin
on your bio...... |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
2/22/2003 |
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I could hear my own heart beating out of my chest. I regressed to my newspaper days when putting the paper to bed and leaving the office in the wee hours alone. I felt fear in those days. Now I will never be a victim.
Love the verse even though it makes that chill return. Its good to remember different passions...even fear at times.
Love and peace,
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
2/22/2003 |
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| Very cool....intense! |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
2/22/2003 |
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Chilling write and a very good picture to go with it.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/22/2003 |
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I like the tempo of this, the way it flows.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/22/2003 |
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| *shivers* excellent, scary write...short, but ohhhhhh, so effective! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :0 |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/22/2003 |
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| Marilyn... chilling...conjures up lots of scary thoughts, good write;-) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/22/2003 |
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| haunting write |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/22/2003 |
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| You capture fright very well. |
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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
2/22/2003 |
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I'd help if I could, but I'm night-blind /-;
good fright read ! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/22/2003 |
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| Screams heard by the frightened... what a wonderful ending. |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
2/22/2003 |
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| Chilling Marilyn...but well written..thanks for the nice note on my page..Floria |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/22/2003 |
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| haunting write, marilyn! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
2/22/2003 |
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A haunting piece Marilyn..very good!
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/22/2003 |
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Good atmospheric write!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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