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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
11/29/2007 |
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| Hmm a dance with the devil-interesting idea and a lovely poem-you have made me think of a poem I have on a woman's dance with the devil |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
2/26/2003 |
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| what could be better....i feel like i need to shake the sand out.... |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
2/25/2003 |
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| hi another foorprint for you here you go~see my footprint? here i make two more~~ this fun this was an exotic and erotic poem it was so cool grreat job on this |
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| Reviewed by Adam Walsvik |
2/25/2003 |
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Each line is like a breaking wave. I love the meter as well as the substance of this piece.
Adam |
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| Reviewed by Morchuis |
2/25/2003 |
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Hi Susan,
Tell me I must know, was the tide coming in, or was it going out.
Morchuis |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
2/25/2003 |
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| Beautiful imagery, you put me there on the beach as a voyour of an innocent's fall from grace. |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
2/25/2003 |
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I'm not sure what kind on dancing they are doing in the picture, but it looks like someone could get hurt! lol Great write Susan!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
2/25/2003 |
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Oh yes this one is evocative Susan.
peg |
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