|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Hmm a dance with the devil-interesting idea and a lovely poem-you have made me think of a poem I have on a woman's dance with the devil|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|what could be better....i feel like i need to shake the sand out....|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|hi another foorprint for you here you go~see my footprint? here i make two more~~ this fun this was an exotic and erotic poem it was so cool grreat job on this|
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
|Each line is like a breaking wave. I love the meter as well as the substance of this piece.
|Reviewed by Morchuis
Tell me I must know, was the tide coming in, or was it going out.
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Beautiful imagery, you put me there on the beach as a voyour of an innocent's fall from grace.|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|I'm not sure what kind on dancing they are doing in the picture, but it looks like someone could get hurt! lol Great write Susan!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Oh yes this one is evocative Susan.