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A Love so Right But Wrong
by jing javier

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We started out guiding and helping along the way,

A friendship formed a path that day.

As we stroll together down friendship's road,

sharing stories of today and of old.

We laughed and talked of the loves in our lives,

seeking guidance and opinions from each other's side.

Well, somewhere along the path of our friendship stroll,

my love for you blossomed and took hold.

I can't explain what it is about you,

a love that's right but wrong, what can I do?

I find serenity when I'm all alone,

I use this time to love you fully although I know it's wrong.

Our paths crossed for reasons unknown,

a love so right, but wrong.

I can only say now that I love you all along,

but I ignored the signs of a love so right, but wrong.




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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Excellent write of love
Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
I love the hidden emotions you have uncovered here Jing
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Terrific poem !!!!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was quite lovely and sad...hit close to home for me.

Very beautiful,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
This one is a keeper....
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
I liked this alot..thanks.
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Beautiful.

The Voice
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Nice heartfelt poem, Jing.

TY
Tony:)
Reviewed by William Bonilla
a beautiful write

William
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Touching and beautiful Jing
Chrissie
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
yes love is so confusing and its hard when you want a person you know you cant have this was a very cool poem i enjoyed it a lot
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Sometimes timing can be our undoing. It's painful when something wonderful happens, and it's surrounded by so much hurt.
-James
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Tugs at the heart Jing, Good write.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Fantastic words on love. Teresa
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Excellent write of love. The power of love is bewildering.
Amor
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