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A Love so Right But Wrong
by jing javier
Thursday, February 27, 2003

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We started out guiding and helping along the way,

A friendship formed a path that day.

As we stroll together down friendship's road,

sharing stories of today and of old.

We laughed and talked of the loves in our lives,

seeking guidance and opinions from each other's side.

Well, somewhere along the path of our friendship stroll,

my love for you blossomed and took hold.

I can't explain what it is about you,

a love that's right but wrong, what can I do?

I find serenity when I'm all alone,

I use this time to love you fully although I know it's wrong.

Our paths crossed for reasons unknown,

a love so right, but wrong.

I can only say now that I love you all along,

but I ignored the signs of a love so right, but wrong.

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/11/2003
Excellent write of love
Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann 3/10/2003
I love the hidden emotions you have uncovered here Jing
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 3/2/2003
Terrific poem !!!!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/1/2003
This was quite lovely and sad...hit close to home for me.

Very beautiful,

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/27/2003
This one is a keeper....
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 2/27/2003
I liked this alot..thanks.
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) 2/27/2003

The Voice
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 2/27/2003
Nice heartfelt poem, Jing.

Reviewed by William Bonilla 2/27/2003
a beautiful write

Reviewed by Christine Morell 2/27/2003
Touching and beautiful Jing
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 2/27/2003
yes love is so confusing and its hard when you want a person you know you cant have this was a very cool poem i enjoyed it a lot
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 2/27/2003
Sometimes timing can be our undoing. It's painful when something wonderful happens, and it's surrounded by so much hurt.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 2/27/2003
Tugs at the heart Jing, Good write.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 2/27/2003
Fantastic words on love. Teresa
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 2/27/2003
Excellent write of love. The power of love is bewildering.
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