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Existential Void
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

Saturday, March 01, 2003

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Hope everyone is doing well in these days of uncertainty.


Over those slopes I notice

massive fields of corrupted crops

a mad city lies ahead

there’s a tormented river

running constantly through it


Leaving this existential void

I dare not float too high

for breathing is a must


Arranging my eyes on your celestial silk

I have to glide towards you

your galaxy is full of dreamscapes

the purest, freshest of air

I yearn for just one touch of your essence


Dragging my tongue for my safe arrival,

landing in your heavenly montage

you appear like a magician’s wand

you ask, where are my wings

I reply, for your love, I fly with none.


Ron Axelson
© 2/28/03
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Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 3/7/2003
Wonderful!! Loved the way you ended this, too...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/2/2003
I almost missed this cause of tc;-)...you did super with this Ron...you soared my friend;-) xoxoxoxoxo
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/2/2003
Wow! I have to agree with Jude here as well! Loved your style and the imagery you've created, Ron! Beautifully written, precious heart.... hugs :)
Reviewed by jude forese 3/2/2003
this poem is excellent in style and imagery... you've done a great job on this one!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/2/2003
Wow...This rocks..Love the poem!

Excellent,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/2/2003
Perfection?
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/1/2003
Oh Ron! This is just b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!!!! Wow!!!!!

"you ask, where are my wings

I reply, for your love, I fly with none." - Excellent indeed!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 3/1/2003
Beautiful beautiful beautiful...I loved it!

sssmmmoooottttccchhhhh
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 3/1/2003
This one's unique, Ron!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 3/1/2003
Your poetry is great. I will not comment on the picture as I don't live in US. Excellent write.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/1/2003
This is great Ron! Very powerful. Bill
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 3/1/2003
Brilliant, Ron!! Enjoyed! :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/1/2003
Mercy, you wax...I love this!
I think it is one of your best. Kudos.

~E
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 3/1/2003
very cool, Ron! Great to see you again!!!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/1/2003
good write, ron; but i don't like the design for the proposed memorial to the world trade centers! :( i think the design is UGLY! there were better choices for it! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/1/2003
This poem took me right there on the spot, not knowing if I wanted to take a chance and breathe ?"fresh air" or stay down and choke. An awesome write Ron
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/1/2003
Ron this is simply wonderful writing..I love the last line..fantastic..floria
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 3/1/2003
good one
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/1/2003
Outstanding..
Chrissie
Reviewed by Oisín Breen 3/1/2003
true perfection?
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/1/2003
The picture is so perfect for this poem and the words are so well done with desription and imagery. I loved the way you ended it.
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