a chapter, one... she/undone
by Micha Julian
Sunday, March 02, 2003
Print Save Become a Fan
sing-song madness/ redone
for every " 'Person, Interrupted' "
when she was still so much alive
worried, yes, yet eyes still wide
something lurked Inside
who was she? just out of her teens
when she had (quite awake!)
foreseen that one day,
how? when? why? she could not say,
just knew that there would come
and so, it did!
somehow, just knew the time to be
Alive! as then
was it all so hard to see
when one looked back
no reasons, none that THEY could find,
so puzzled, Docs perplexed, said,
"She should Not have lost her mind."
oh, really? what?
oh, sure, okay?
Yeah, wish it hadn't flown a w a y!
no one knows yet. no one still. no
one gets it, least and lastly-- she who
was so 'Not' supposed to be so ill!?
Oh, that my friends was
simply (simply?) a
Yes, okay. okay!
Life, as known, had come un-
seemed as if it was ALL-DONE...
Goodbye! to SHE who once was Free!
And thus, all this was to become
the grimy grist of--
this, this chapter, one.
there is much more that must be said
so many chapters to be written, READ!
she is NOT
hope must live somehow, any, any who have known such 'madness' know, also, she/yes, and she is me, sigh~
& yes, I AM 'still here' -- know that you are not alone-- you are not, and as painful as it may be, my hope is with you, please accept it and please, hold fast your own...
Want to review or comment on this
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|Yes my friend you have wreitten this was a very unique style and an understanding to all that will read your work. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Four Provinces (Reader)
|every single day is a struggle, mi! (((mi-moo) You have captured the feeling that is ever-present, but so hard to describe. Great work!
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|thank you, all, not easy, this... all too true, you know, and just, this, these gifts you give with your comments...make, well, help one feel accepted just a bit more, perhaps...so grateful... for your comments, oh god, yes....and that someone might be, well, might feel some solace, god, I hope so....thank you, all...what an amazing group of writers...people, so grateful FOR having you all...um, means much, yes...
truths accepted, oh what words can do...thanks from my heart and just more...
|Reviewed by richard poor
|if you keep writing like this before you know it,you will have your book...!you awe me micha!!!|
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|very very original.... you speak from the soul... when i read your works, it is as if you are right here telling each word to me...|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|You are brilliant, Micha. Imagine, if you will, so many who benefit from your work. You make their pain and solace that much less.
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This one speaks for me as well!! Your work is always so introspective, and that is healing for all who read it, because it is the "others" that put their perceptions of what and how it should all be on us, never taking the time, or wanting to take it, to understand why we feel as we do. I am looking forward to reading much more, your work will always be healing for the inner child, because when we read it, we do know that we are not alone!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i admire your work very much so...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|such genius & sensitivity, sweet M...looking forward to all of the chapters|
|Reviewed by Madame X
|Micha, I love your work and respect your mind. Fantastic, incredible write.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Brilliant, Mi....I am speechless...|