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A dieing wish!
by Qamar A Abbasi

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I am, breathing my last, near the point of death
I will be gone soon as
My eyes are closing
And my body is struggling.
I see a beam of light appearing before me
Calling me to its origin.
I hear people crying in the background
Praying for my well-being.
As the clock keeps ticking
I breathe my last.
I see my body lying dead in the bed
As I depart from it. I see people around it
Crying and mourning.
Leaving this dilemma behind, I keep flying
High enough desperately looking for my mother.

Mother, welcome me to your heaven.



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Reviewed by Buddy Angel
What a very moving write.
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
Very sad, and beautiful and haunting...
~Shezz
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Nice flow and very visional
Reviewed by LEZBO
Lulllllllu that was sooooo sweet. if u were here right now i would give you ah big huggy. and may you ami jaan get the best in the here-after inshallah
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
poignant
Reviewed by Seema
It is interesting to notice that all of your poems represent your feelings and love for your mother. This is a great tribute to any mother. Your love for your mother is outstanding. Well done.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
qamar, this is outstanding! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) to you, qamar! :)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Qamar,
This is excellent.
Peg
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Sometimes we must have faith. Excellent.
Reviewed by jude forese
you project into a land few wander... well done!
Reviewed by Fahad
doggy thats hot as shit, but i didnt love u i would say ur GAY!!, ahahah, joking. Its off the hook nigga...
Reviewed by Saima
Woh qamar! This is deep...sad... wow i dunno what to say...I hope things just get easier for you...Inshallah everything will be fine

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