|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Deeply spiritual in nature. Words of wisdom we must all ponder, Paul. This one gets me thinking! Hugs:) Sheila|
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|There are some questions that every living, conscious,soul on the face of the planet will have to ask at one time or another no matter their location, education, their level of understanding. Some of the most profound truths are so incredibly simple and yet it is easy not to think about them, but as a dear old friend once said to me (and it still took me 18 months to come to terms with it) "Not making a decision, IS making a decision - and not necessarily the right one." Peace be, Paul. There is an end to every battle and after the dark night of the soul, a dawn.|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Chose the truth and faith I don't think you will see the darkness for long nice poem|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|What a profound statement, the only one with me forever is myself! I love this poem, Paul.|
|Reviewed by Jason Wise
|"The only one with me forever is myself."
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Deep thoughts with a very interesting question throughout it.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A wonderful write. Food for thought. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|A thought provoking piece. Great style.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|You speak so much truth in your excellent poem.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I like the ending!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Paul, just like a coin has two sides with different engravings, so is there two sides in life ... good and evil, and all of us have each side within us. It is the desire and the doing of good that keeps the evil in check. It started in the garden of Eden; or wherever else you want to find it.
It is with us from the beginning and will be with us till the end ... of our lives ...
and of ... eternity ... Bill
|Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader)
|Great write, Yes we all choose our destiny and sometimes we really mess up, But when we do we have to pay. Loved it /Thelma|