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Carved In Ice
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Monday, March 03, 2003

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I am cold,
So cold my hands are numb,
And my lips hurt,
I cannot speak,
And my ears are frozen,
I cannot hear the words
You say,
Though I see your lips moving,
And I see in your eyes,
Your anger rise,
As you realize,
I do not understand
A word you say…

I try to tell you,
I am cold baby,
I need you to warm
My soul,
But you don’t seem to know-
And my arms are frozen
To my side,
And I can’t raise them,
To hold you,
My feet won’t move,
They are frozen in the earth,
So I can’t run to you,
Seek your comfort,
Your touch to make me warm,
Damn I’ve never been so cold…

Ice is forming on my eyes,
And I am going blind,
Can’t see you anymore…
Are you still there?

The snow is falling,
And I am being covered,
By soft feathery whiteness,
Blending in so lovely,
With the blackness of my soul…
But you don’t seem to know,
I watch as you walk away-
And I am finally numb
To everything I once felt…

I am no longer cold baby,
No longer anything,
Standing here like an ice statue,
Someone once carved,
And now the party is over,
And it lies forgotten on the
Banquet table…
Melting into puddles,
That drip on the floor…

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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/3/2003
WOW, this is such a lonely lonely write. You've expressed yourself so beautifully
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 3/3/2003
Super cool write Retta !
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 3/3/2003
Very impressive, Retta. Incredible write.
Amor
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/3/2003
brilliant write
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/3/2003
okay I know i am the weird poet and the rotten apple in this great bunch of poets but i saw this in such a scary way like some one who got murdered and left to be covered in snow. But this could also mean the ehart and feelings that got frozen over and left out to die away either way this was a chilly frighteneing poem that makes you stop and wonder you did an ex eptional jobo n this fantastic poem
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/3/2003
magical metaphor...your words are a delight to read, each one meaningful!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/3/2003
Wow!
Ditto to everything said here.
~E
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/3/2003
Retta, you are a gifted poet. That is your poetry is in the superior category. Whatever you write turns out polished. I really am honored to read one of your poems.
Bill Murray
Reviewed by Jason Wise 3/3/2003
"I am no longer cold baby,
No longer anything,
Standing here like an ice statue,
Someone once carved,"

loved these lines
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/3/2003
An incredible piece
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 3/3/2003
So sad, so moving, and so powerful. Strong write. Great job.
Jill
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 3/3/2003
Wonderful write Retta!
Jack
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/3/2003
This touchs the heart in a very chilly way. Great write.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 3/3/2003
A brilliant write...Every word right on the mark...Ty, Dani
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