Can't you see?
How deeply, I am, missing you,
Now is the time, To read between the lines,
Where you can find, a love that's truly divine.
To place, in perspective,
Like an artist, painting a picture,
In your mind, tiling together, a scene,
Like a picturesque, mosaic, in a dream.
Renditions, of heavenly moments, from the past,
Drifting endlessly, into a lovely time,
As they seem to forever last,
Those moments, when your soul, truly shined.
With a love, so sensuous and pure,
That was observed,
In intimate moments, down the line,
Of soft and gentler times.
At the corner, of dawn,
When my eyes opened,
From a dream world, finding you by my side,
I know, your love me,
Will never die.
By William Bonilla......9/20/02
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|Reviewed by A PAX
|This is so binding, and trusting
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|William..."like an artist painting a picture"
Yes there is always so much more between the lines...love this...floria
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very beautiful write William.....gentle
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Your heart revealed here so sensuously. Great !!!
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Wow! This is great William!
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|tender and sweet, just the way love should be.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You got it bad. Love that is.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A beautiful, romantic painting of love's constant longing and joy.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|So beautiful William. I know these feelings that you've expressed so well.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|William, what a beautiful poem for your beloved. And I can understand the feeling when you awoke and there she was! A very good poem. Bill|