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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
3/4/2003 |
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oh, damn....no, you are not alone on this train...
so relate, hard to be objective, still, once again, so few words..so perfect a poem of struggling, aching souls...so damned human, and you make poetry...you...you reach right into the core...
"i've been waiting for this train
as i dance upon the track
ever since i can remember
ever since that far back,
it's supposed to carry me
take me all the way home "
again, bravo is not enough...maybe thank you, from the depths of one's heart, this poem...'in this station'....richard, you are SO GOOD, I...find myself having to stop and leave the screen for how felt your work is,,,,,,,,,,,, and you, damn it, awe again and read one's insides+++++++ |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
3/4/2003 |
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there is such a sparsness to your work that is most refreshing.
Its a very good quality |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
3/4/2003 |
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Sir,
I do believe I know of the train you have been waiting for! I agree with Victor, this one makes you think!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/4/2003 |
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Uniquely put and very well written.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/4/2003 |
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| depends who the engineer is. A poem to think about. |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/4/2003 |
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| Brilliant richard...Floria |
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