His Dark Love
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Tuesday, March 04, 2003
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Ah, my dark friend
You laid a trap for me,
And though I smelled the stench of your love,
I walked right into your lair-
I believed too much in my own strength of will-
I thought I could pull free before you swallowed me whole...
Your strength surpassed me,
Even as your cunning outwitted me,
And the unwholesomeness of your love
invaded my soul,
And made me a slave to your needs-
My pain gave you pleasure,
And I could only scream in agony
When your presence invaded my mind,
And your fingers wrapped around my soul,
Squeezing until I collapsed in a heap at your feet.
It was then I saw you smile,
And in those strange colored eyes
I saw the hunger that was your love for me,
Saw the sickness in your soul
That made you what you are-
It was then that I tried to run,
for foolish child that I was-
I thought I could play tag with a God and run away-
Thought I would laugh with my friends
About the dangerous game I had played-
I thought my quickness and youth would save me;
For I saw your size and thought you slow,
Saw the gray in your temples
and judged you old-
Thought I could outrun your shadow
like a hawk on a cloudy day...
My God, you were quick!
And though many think me fast,
You were faster still-
Your warrior's eyes watched the signals
My body gave away-
And before my muscles even twitched
Your hand reached out like lightning
And raised me to the sky,
A sacrifice to serve your needs,
And as my blood ran down your arm-
You dipped your fingers in my life,
And tasted my soul...
How will I ever forget that smile?
Those eyes that pierced me to the bone,
Those arms that trapped me like a spider in a web.
I weep for the key to the shackles
You have placed around my heart,
For when I look into those lion colored eyes,
Your dark beauty captures me once more,
And though I am not afraid-
For I am eternally bound by your dark love
And crave the blood I tasted on your lips-
Need the strength of your arms
To crush me to your chest
And feel your hot breath whisper
That you love me the best-
It doesn't even matter if its true ,
My soul belongs to you...
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|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A wonderful dark write. Excellent Poem.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Retta, your soul was captured by a strong force. But you are so much stronger than that force. You capture all like myself who read you. HAIL TO RETTA ... A STRONGER FORCE ... Poetry in motion never to stop
floating in the atmosphere above us on a cloud of the brilliant poets. A special place reserved for you words. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|..one of the best dark love poems I've ever read,Retta... glad it's not vampire, makes it more believable,especially for any who may have gone through similar
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Love this write its soooooooooooo good !|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Very dark and deep.|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|Very chillingly dark and awesome thought a moment there it was about meLOL okay i got weird mind hee heeLOL this was fantastic poem|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Chills down my spine.. captivateing.|
|Reviewed by Jason Wise
|And in those strange colored eyes
"I saw the hunger that was your love for me,
Saw the sickness in your soul
That made you what you are-"
wonderful line. loved the poem.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Great job Retta! Well done.
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Holy Guacamole, Retta, what a wonderful, dark, tense, quivery piece this is... Fantastic write!!! :)|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Retta, I am a first time reader of your writings. You are very deep. I think by reading this you are very sensitive, and that is a virtue! I like this a lot and have a tracker on you.I now can read you all the time. Have you ever written of the cougar? I am a feline lover! Be Well.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Fabulous poem Retta ! Spooky!
Very well done
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Mercy. This is a vampyre poem...or should be.
I just love these.
Good job ! ! !
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|dark, deep, emotional write, reindeer! outstanding display of emotions! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. ((((((HUGS)))))) to you! :)|