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Something Wretched Lonely Sits
by . Oakling

Tuesday, March 04, 2003

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Something wretched lonely sits
Waits for me with eyes all lit
Tis human maybe perhaps not
Matters none as to the plot

Empty castle all alone
With forest tall and overgrown
Its face looks out onto the sea
As angry cliffs carry me

Raging winds push me back
The castle canít ward off attack
I look to find all those within
But find just me and the raging wind

Dismal gray and cold hard stone
A place I know I once called home
But now time has passed it by
And nothing kindred hears our cry

Except the wretched lonely thing
Like solitude that time will bring
As it has to my castle shell
Where lonely, I shall sit a spell

December 20, 2002

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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/6/2003
This was so moving! Very touching,
Liked it quite a bit,

Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/4/2003
Wretched is a good title. It is full of gloom and doom. bill
Reviewed by jude forese 3/4/2003
what a deep sense of lonliness...
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 3/4/2003
Love the imagery of this...great mood piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 3/4/2003
Yes, this is very, very, good--touches the soul.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/4/2003
Nice. You are really cranking them out today, and everyone is good, good, good.
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