|Reviewed by Netta Jack
|LOVED IT!!! Great write. The ending made the whole piece. Talent!!!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|That....................was me!!!! don't tell anyone.......lol
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|oooo it could be one of the big wild cats that has escaped into the countryside and can smell the fresh piece of steak on your kitchen table..........or is something trying to scratch its way out?|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|So thats where Terrick, my pet Dragon ran off too. You know he is always out checking on the Den people. guess he had to see what the Phantom was all about. I'll be right over to fetch him back home. He truly is harmless. Thanks for watching him for me.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|leaves me scratching my head... well done! have the extra-terrestials arrived? ;)|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Then I hear a loud scream, and am challenged by a large bull frog who 'croaks'
before I can do anything but wet my pants.
This ends the tale of the frong that croaked and the man who wet his pants.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I forgot to pay your bill
Do you have any candles?
Enjoyed the fright.......
|Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
|It was definetly a figment of an imaginitive poet's mind... Great write, and stay away from the basement at nights... ;) hhehe, cheers,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|It's your comma button, darlin'...
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Hmm...lights go out...so do I. Scary work done very well with lots of fright|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Nice write I hate when something scratches at my door like that|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|with roar of lion
a mouse walks in
"sorry about the door
but you wouldn't let me in
don't you know its cold out there
and a cat is right behind me"
hee hee - what's to be afraid of?
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Great poem Chad ...are the men in white coats scratching at your door?
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Hey Chad...it was me...I was scratching and scratching and you would not let me in...So I blew your door down..and wrecked your electricity..That'll teach ya to not let me in. Hahahahaha...good write...funny...a good puzzle..Floria|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|eeeeee-hahahaha!!!!!!! The door flung open and you have just entered the twilight zone!!!!!!!.....
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so haunting and wonderful! Ha! I am hiding under the bed! Love it,
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|quite full of horror possibly
its good its good good
as to whats scratching
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|YIPE! *shivering* scary, intense write...i love your style...it builds and builds and builds then GOTCHA!! no warning...well done! not like the so called "horror" movies, when the music clues you in...something's gonna happen...your poems are much better, instead of seeing the action on screen, the reader gets to use his or her imagination...and sometimes it gets carried away *shivers* delicious, creepy, excellent write! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)|