|You're words come from your deep soul that's why they resound so honest and heartfelt. Immortality, ah, that is your name.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|PASSIONATE AND SO EXCELLENT
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Susan this is excellent and full of passion, love the art too...|
|Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
|Wonderful, lovely! One suggestion, and just my opinion, in the 4th line I would take out either "graceful" or "statuesque" just seems the wordiness of that line breaks up the excellent rhythm that is so prevalent in the rest of the piece (just my O.S.H.O.) A wonderful write! Mal.|
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|Hi Buddy! Beautiful and SENSUOUS! You're so passionate, Susan. Excellent!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Beautiful write Susan!