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When War
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Thursday, March 06, 2003

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When war starts,
Life ends and death begins
Light ends and shade prevails
Joy ends and despair begins
For war is the ravenous devil
Born to gulp the balmy blood
And dethrone the humanity
Into the itinerary of disgust

When war starts,
Serenity ends and brutality begins
Affluence ends and dearth prevails
Adore ends and dissension begins
For war is the repulsive venom
Born to obliterate the soul of life
And smolder the heart of love
In the furnace of perpetual strife

When war starts,
Veracity ends and deception begins
Independence ends and anarchy prevails
Appetite ends and starvation begins
For war is the storm of covetousness
Blown by the forest of ascendancy
That deracinates the seeds of love
And barrens the womb of mother Earth


When war stops,
Death ends and life begins
Shade ends and light prevails
Despair ends and joy begins
For peace is the fountain of joy
That revives the snoozing heart
And enshrouds the rhythm of life
With the fragrance of divine love

When war stops,
Brutality ends and serenity begins
Dearth ends and affluence prevails
Dissension ends and adore begins
For peace is the saccharine nectar
Born to nourish the essence of life
And make this discernible Earth
A facsimile of eternal Paradise

When war stops,
Deception ends and veracity begins
Anarchy ends and independence prevails
Starvation ends and appetite begins
For peace is the zephyr of tranquility
Blown by the forest of generosity
That swirls and glides the dark clouds
Of abhorrence, remote from its territory

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader) 3/9/2003
Thank you for this, sweet soul.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/6/2003
I loved what you had to say true, and so well done,

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/6/2003
very nicely written here it was a wonderful poem that speaks out against war nice job opn this
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/6/2003
ambiguous write Bhuwan
well done
Love Tinka
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/6/2003
Mr. Bhuwan, what a masterpiece, of good and evil.
Ecellently Penned

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/6/2003
Excellent write.
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 3/6/2003
Wow... with you on this one... so well put BRAVO!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/6/2003
What a beautiful rendition of the negative and the positive..remarkable write Bhuwan..Clap clap..floria
Reviewed by Thelma Shutters (Reader) 3/6/2003
This is a wonderful piece, I just wish our leaders would see what they are about to unfold, this is going to be terrible. Thank You. thelma
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/6/2003
I echo TRC..your thoughts reflect those of many. A very powerful poem Bhuwan.
Chrissie x
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/6/2003
Lovely comparison between start and finish. Exceptional write.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/6/2003
Chuwan, This is powerful my friend...
excellent Peg
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/6/2003
Bhuwan, very good poem and insights on war. Excellently expressed.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 3/6/2003
Nice write Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/6/2003
Dear Bhuwan, This was very insightful. I only have to look in my own country, so much strife and yet war has not begun. I can imagine what if there is war.
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