|Reviewed by C. Gourlay
|this is really quite something. love the way you come across so unaware of yourself.|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Quiet is oft times good loved the write|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|You're quite successful at directing the reader by the use of stanza breaks. It's a manipulative little trick that I use myself, so I'm tipping my hat to you. When you are satisfied, I hope you'll post all three parts so we can read it as a whole.
P.s. love the separation with "ago"...gonna try that myself.
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Quiet is better than screams in the night...change is dynamic, very rarely coming quietly. Cool piece, Mike!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Sometimes change whispers so quietly...So that we can just slide into starting fresh....Great poem..Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|oooh! I love this! Very deep, and very good!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Lots of feelings and thoughts to this one. Nice write!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|So bittersweet this poem.. Sometimes things do change so quietly...|