|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|i agree with you over the mother issue this waas a painful and emotinal poem thank yoou for sharing it|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Such a heartbreaking
Though written beautiful...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thank You for sharing Erica...
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|I am sorry! Thank You for sharing.
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|I understand how some woul see a deeper love in this poem.. but i MUST clarify.. It took me YEARS and YEARS to come to terms with this woman.. my mother.. Love ..she knows nothing of.. She knows how to break you.. your body.. your teeth.. your bones..if this is love and i am mistaken..Let me know.|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|nope no heart there nope nope nope
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Erica, some mothers are too demonstrative while some are not. But the love would always have been there.
Sure it is painful, but think of those who never saw their moms at all, like me !!!
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|Im sure inside her shelted heart..she loves you....excellent write!!!!|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I am sorry for your pain.|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Oh, Erica...how this breaks the heart of the reader. You've made me appreciate my own mother more. Writing it down makes it real and oftentimes easier to put things in their proper place. Keep writing it all down, hon.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Erica, very sad poem but very heartfelt.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
"I just want you to know
that little piece of heart
though filled with scars
will always love you
and will always care..
Just with suspicion
and fear. "
can so relate through the touchingof your fear and my tears I see through this powerful heartfelt voyage.