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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
3/8/2003 |
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| Erica, I am crying for this child. This is sadder than anything I have ever read. When the prayers cross over from give me love and bubble gum to give me death and release, you know life really sucks. |
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| Reviewed by ken Oliver |
3/8/2003 |
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| J, you never cease to amaze me on what you can write in a matter of minutes. I know how close to home this hits... |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
3/8/2003 |
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A beautiful prayer, but heartbreaking.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/8/2003 |
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| Erica, I know just where this poem comes from and where it is going, My Friend, the Survivor. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/8/2003 |
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| heartbreakingly sad |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
3/8/2003 |
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| this was a very sad and touchingly frightening ordeal to go through but you are sucha remarkable writer i sure all friends here at authorsden will help youget though it you are so nice i hope yooou have better brighter future |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
3/8/2003 |
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I'm with Rage Reason on this one. I rage.
josie |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/8/2003 |
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ERICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My prayer as many others from child hood. I use to ask God to just kill me so I could end the pain.....
Touched me this one very deep.
Peg |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/8/2003 |
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Lovely one, Erica.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
3/8/2003 |
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Heartwrenching Erica
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/8/2003 |
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Very sad, execellent write,
William |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
3/8/2003 |
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Dear Erica, Very sad situation for you I know. Writing about it is good therapy, they say.Who are they you ask. A shrink I know. I think I told you by e-mail what happened to me. If you ever want to talk, e-mail me!!
You are Loved, Erica.
You're not alone.
God Bless You!
tony:) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/8/2003 |
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| >tears < :( |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/8/2003 |
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Erica, how beautifull sad this is. I see you as a child praying this same prayer I and so many others have said. I hope you still keep in touch with your guardian angel
I do;-)
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/8/2003 |
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| heartbreakingly sad...*tears* excellent write, erica! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( |
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