Symphony of Love in the key of D
by Netta Jack
Saturday, March 08, 2003
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Passion fills the room as our eyes meet
Anticipation creates movement in my seat
The scent of his cologne moves through the air
That familiar smell makes this moment complete
My lips tremble. Still I try to speak
He places one finger over my mouth. Shhhhh
Then he thrust his tongue down deep
Kisses so intense saying I love you becomes unnecessary
His hand softly caress my cheek
Then passed down over my shoulders
down my back toward the places he seeks
My body reacts to the heat
Perspiration on my forehead beads
My palms began to sweat; raw desire begins to creep
from within my soul as he penetrates
and continues to kiss me without missing a beat
I hear our thighs clapping, my unconscious moans of satisfaction and the bed squeaks
He changes the rhythm to a slow, sweet
long stroke. My moans change to shrieks
as his fingers simultaneously play with the peak
of all my carnal desires.
The kisses stop and his tongue begins to freak
my senses into a frenzy so intense and unique
I release. I release. I release
a scream so loud it is heard on the street
He covers my mouth, smiles and says you’re welcome, my treat.
It is his turn now to reach
ecstasy. He enters and begins to move with a deliberate rhythmic streak
1, 2, 3, 4 in
1, 2, 3, 4 out
1, 2, 3, 4 in
Repeat, repeat, repeat
until sweat begins to bleed
down his face. His pace quickens.
Faster, faster, faster no retreat
He clenches his face. Ahhhhhhhh, love is replete
Exhausted, we both drift off to sleep
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|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
|loved the rythm and pace|
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Wow...this felt like...well, it moved, you know, it moved as the lovers did, the beat quickening and sliding back down and just wonderfully done! It is a real read aloud, and not to mention...one could also, well...feel the heat...Loved how you did this!
(thank you for your comments, too
you made me believe, a bit more, you know...in myself...!)
and AGAIN....whew, this, Netta..is quite a piece!!! BRAVO!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Nice poem Netta|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Netta...you are a one woman ball of creative energy. Each poem gets better and better.
Kudos to you.