|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Cute write ! ; )|
|Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels
|Hahaha too funny
|Reviewed by Jay G
|What kind of place would Eden be for us workaholics? I could picture myself strolling through Utopia always being BOTHERED that I should be doing something!!|
|Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding
|i always maintain that eventually the good Lord and i will need to talk. He is supposed to be omnipotent, right?
so how come women were not as well designed as the fruit of the vine? when a tree is thru bearing...the fruit dries up and falls off. women have years of misery, cramps and eventually hot flashes.
all because eve partook of the 'apple'? i thought adam was supposed to be head of the household....the patriarch. he should have stood up to eve and said...'baby...that ain't even fit to make a pie!"
but...noooooo..and then he eats it too. ya see where i'm goin with this....
we get stuck with 9 months of puking, unbearable pain, 18 years of trials, and then we have imbalanced hormones, internal combustion....and what did man suffer??
okay, i guess our only concession is that we can have more than a single orgasm...now ..if the man could only last as long for us to enjoy them~wink& grin~
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|A good way of looking at it! why wasnt adam tempted by a songbird?|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Reading this, I couldn't get one thought out of my mind...
I wish I was that damn snake.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Nice write Lady A!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Maybe because it's "woman's day" great write!|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Anita, I remember the ID. There is a chance, Adam lied...LOL
It is always great to read your humor.
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|uh oh Lady A sounds like she slipping into the lands of insanity like meLOL this was a awesome poem and i though a guy agree that eve was definitly set up and should ahve been forgiven|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I think you are right !
Well done, too.