|Reviewed by Libby Stone
|Very thought provoking message. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I really like the structure in this. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|wise as always.
I most love your poems of this ilk
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Bravo this is full blown truth loved the way you wrote this !!!!|
|Reviewed by marilyn
|oops, sorry, let me rephrase that. This exuded so much insight and truth|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This exuded so much truth and insightfulness.
A great write!
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent write and observations...Truer words were never spoken. We always want most what we can't have LOL|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|very inspirational and a great ending but it is so true humans crave more and more things that is how we are. Sad but true awesome job on this fantasitic poem|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Very astute observations!!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|A conundrum for sure.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Wisdom has bestowed it blessings upon you my frined,
An Execellently Penned piece.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are full of wisdom Bhuwan...we are made in the image, and there are two sides to the coin God and His antithesis Satan, we embody them both and are always in this spiritual warfare until we learn how to
defeat the wrong.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Now this just spoke to my heart so clearly! Yes, it is so true!
Loved this poem,
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Bhuwan, yes deep thoughts as Debs said "This is the story of human
Please forgive us, dear God
And teach us to cherish those things,
Which are closer to our heart, and
Accept the things as they are "
I confess I am guilty of the first stanza...
Excellent write Bravo my friend Poet.
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Wise words and very true. We always long for what is not with us
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -