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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
3/10/2003 |
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| Ah, Susan ! What a delightful fantasy ! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/10/2003 |
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Susan, as free as a breeze in a tree. A feather floating forever, without restraints
of any time. What a trip. But it never lasts long enough to be completely satisfying. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/9/2003 |
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| I enjoyed playing with your "child within." Next time I'll be a butterfly, okay? |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/9/2003 |
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| Susan....this is very profound write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/9/2003 |
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3-09-03
To Be Yourself!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
3/9/2003 |
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its very well structured m'lady
the last line is a killer |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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| I love this, is one of my favorites of yours! |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
3/9/2003 |
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Wonderful write Susan! I love it.
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
3/9/2003 |
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| So carefree. A very beautiful write Susan |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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Beautiful choice of words.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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| Ah, to be a feather, you wouln't like to expound upon your more worldy travels as did "The Flea?" Enjoyed the poem, but then, you wrote it so what else is new? |
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