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| Reviewed by Jimmy Mills |
3/12/2003 |
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| Reindeer--you know that this is my all time favorite piece. You will always be my favorite poet. This poem exceeds all my expectations. A masterpiece at best! |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
3/10/2003 |
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| Wow awesome and so lonely and bitter and so sad this was wow great job on this |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/10/2003 |
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| Retta, love the poem. A little late but always good. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/10/2003 |
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| Retta, everything turns on the moment. Shade os grey are the ones that push their way to the front of you mind. Colors disappear somewhere in time. You are such a fine writer. I always enjoy reading you. bill |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/9/2003 |
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| there is always an opening in the clouds... look for it and go for it... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/9/2003 |
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| You are a prolific writer and each one is excellent...Kudo's |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/9/2003 |
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Nothing is black or white,
Nothing all roses without the thorns,
No clouds without rain,
No sun without pain...
No way for me to stay,
My life has become just;
Shades of Grey
Beautiful use of emotion. Glad things worked out for you. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
3/9/2003 |
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| Everyone is entitled to be loved and be happy...at least thats my theory |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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Thought provoking piece.
I share conversations with my children about this frequently. Many things in life are "grey"... Love, happiness, success. They come in differing degrees.
But some things are black and white... Honor, respect, character. These things, either you have it, or you don't.
When in your pursuit for the grey things, conduct yourself in a black and white manner, and your life will know little regret.
-James |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/9/2003 |
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Hey...just a short note...
we divorced..remarried 3 years later..love so much better the second time around!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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| You know, I struggle to express the infinite feeling that the color grey. I would say that the best compliment that I can give anyone is the one that I give you now; you inspire me to be a better writer. Bravissimo. |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
3/9/2003 |
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Life is short, move on and be proud. Great write.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by J. Wise |
3/9/2003 |
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"And they said they loved me...
I believed them,
Just like I once believed in you-"
This is one of my favorite works of yours. truly beautiful poem.
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/9/2003 |
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Too many couples don't believe in the rings
Wonderful write.. |
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| Reviewed by Cherokee Sage |
3/9/2003 |
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Well done, little lady.
Peace,
Cherokee |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/9/2003 |
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3-09-03
This Is Great,i.e. X Girlfriend was Afraid To Hold My Hand__Then, She (Still) Didn't (Doesn't) Want To Let It Go!!
Thanks Your Comments!!
TRAASK |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/9/2003 |
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| A wonderful write...Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
3/9/2003 |
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Hi Retta, This was extremely well written. I wonder, how can anyone not love you?
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tony |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
3/9/2003 |
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| Applauding love this its straight arrow |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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Beautifully done, Reindeer.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/9/2003 |
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Retta,
Excellence
"Now I found someone else to love me...
And you want to say I'm so bad,
But,
Where were you so long ago,
When your love made me cry
And it took someone else to wipe away the tears.
When you were so afraid,
It would mean that you were weak... "
This hit home
Peg |
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