|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Oh and Oh and Ahhhhh, God, this is a masterpiece, to me, so...so extraordinary, and yes, the metaphors and flow...and this IS IT, the 'birthing'
Erin, Standing Ovation... perfect!!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|La La La La hm hm da da
Oh sorry but have you ever read a poem that just sort of sings to you. You know when the flow is just perfect.
NO you Say!!!!
Well just scroll up and check it out.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Erin this is gorgeous writing...Flavia|
|Reviewed by jing javier
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|wonderful use of words and metaphor, you have certainly "bithed" a winner here.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|"down into tornadoes, cascading through tunnels ..." kind of like alice falling ass over teakettle down the rabbit hole ... writing is like that, labor and no holds barred. excellent write|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You are good!|
|Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
|Erin your imagination is always expecting .
Great work .
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Erin, love this one. I could feel the pain of both mother and writer. Outstanding.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Erin, you poetry is so fresh and enjoyable. You improve with each poem. Bill|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|refreshing, original motiff..|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|beautifully articulated...a great treament of the subject|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Well done Erin!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|This is a green bough from the three of emotions dropping heavenly dews to fresh a soul's thirst.
I Salute You, Master Poet Erin Moen.
My gratitude, admiration and Benisons.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Netta Jack
|Loved the flow of this read. Great write.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Truly a stunning write Erin...Loved this very much! Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|I agree super metaphors here !!! Fantastic|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
You just keep getting better and the metaphors excellent.