by Bonnie M Torrente
Sunday, March 09, 2003
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Will I ever know the story, of how I came to be.
The flesh and blood, the skin and bones and who created me.
With still one more component, unseen by human eyes,
It lingers in the silent, quiet, moments of our lives.
It fills our hearts with hope, when despair is at our door.
Silent whispers calming aching hearts, from life's grand tour.
It's the most important part of us, but still a mystery.
How strange that my creator hid the very best of me.
Hidden from my world of form, perceived by no one else.
Elusive spiritual entity, denying me of myself.
A venture worth exploring, passage waits for me alone.
A private journey inward, solo passage... Spiritual Zone.
COPYRIGHT©2000 BY BONNIE TORRENTE.
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|Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
|oooooh! This one was so good I had to hold the sides of my head to keep it from 'sploding!
One knows if I am really overly enjoying something if one witnesses a scene from the movie "Scanners!"
And that almost happened here as I was reading.
Keep writing, you're on to something!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Now this was beautiful and excellent, I loved this...
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|Your an original thinker on spiritual views like me Bonnie...Excellent write..|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|I really enjoyed this one...
Love the words "spiritual zone"
(p.s. don't worry about emailing me--understand how sometimes the emails don't go through to others from our 'dens')
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
This is so special to me.
You are one awesome gem to have found here in this Den.
I'm so glad I came.
I spent the last 3 years working in management for a Convent. My mother passed away last year.
I find my survival a miracle.
There is more than meets the eye, but the eyes and heart must be open, along with the mind.
Go at this search with everything you've got, and may the blessings rain on you.
Beautiful poetry Bonnie...thanks so much for sharing.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Bonnie this is such an excellent write..Floria|
|Reviewed by John Hutchinson
|You're on a rol my friend-good hunting!|
|Reviewed by Victor Jensen
|You are not alone in your search.perhaps I'm wrong but life is short and I believe the answer will be self evident shortly.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Our search goes on endlessly Bonnie. Does anyone ever know anything for sure. Bill|
|Reviewed by Misty Lackey
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Never apologize for exploring the why's and wherefore's it's how we grow;-) Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Very good Bonnie.|