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Sacrifice Becomes Grace
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Monday, March 10, 2003

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Sometimes, in the story of love, sacrifice becomes grace
When the décolletage of catastrophe turns the head of fate
To the psychological strive of lovers with their own state
In the heart of their hearts, subjugated by their revulsion
Of each other, inflamed by the murky belief of their mind
That smolders the soul of love in the furnace of suspicion
From where the ashes of their love flows towards the hell
Blown by the hurricane of infidelity and interminable pain

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 3/12/2003
I agree a million and one percent right here. It is so sad. You have a good way with words. Teresa
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/11/2003
A profound thoughful write. Wonderful.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/11/2003
So powerful, profound thoughts, Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza 3/10/2003
geez sir poet... this is absolutely fantastic! very good piece here. the last line caught my heart, pierced with a little tingling pain. good gracious poem!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 3/10/2003
Trite, I!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/10/2003
Bravo! Bhuwan a superb piece...your perspective excels...
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/10/2003
my friend, this is a fantstic deep write,
the picture is mesmerizing,
Excellently Penned

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/10/2003
"Sacrifice Becomes Grace"

IT is a composition catalyzed by chemical emotions, which transformed the ugly face of sacrifice into an arrow pointing the light of Consciousness.

It was poemized to be painted with ink solved with blood, but it was written with ICHOR from the veins of Apollo and delivered by Erato, assisted by Thalia.

I salute You, Honorable Master Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya.

Long Healthy Life.

My respect and gratitude.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/10/2003
Wow..This was wonderful..Love your thoughts here, and how true they ring,

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/10/2003
Excellent art Bhuwan,Very profound write and very good. Luch and Many hugs
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 3/10/2003
I was struck by the art here. It is a "compliment" to your verse. You have a way of reaching depths in a person where thoughts are deeper.
Love and peace,
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