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Parody of Patterns
by A PAX

Monday, March 10, 2003

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Success isn't a result of spontaneous combustion. You must set yourself on fire. ~Arnold H. Glasow



Parody of Patterns

A promise is a parody right from its inception
That can explode like fireworks,in every which direction
Its intention maybe noble, with honor at its core
But what is pledged with purest heart, can go right out the door!

So ask me not for promises I fear I may not keep
Accept my words and actions, I've set in easy reach
Just know that I am here for you, tho I may seem oblique
And try to light my fireworks, in patterns straight and neat

Anita
7/18/02

I wrote this poem... because... for period of time I had so many people in my life claiming that I promised this or that....and I knew....I didn't!!



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Reviewed by Jay G 3/11/2003
Elegant. And I echo Mr. Bonilla!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/11/2003
clap clap clap...just superb!!!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/11/2003
Oh my goodness, did that happen to you too?? Awesome poem, I can relate.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/11/2003
I promise you, I loved this poem
Well done

William
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/10/2003
Anita...this is beautifully done. I learned never to make a promise.I dislike when people do , because most times it does as you say, "goes right out the door"...
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 3/10/2003
Excellent, indeed!
"But what is pledged with purest heart, can go right out the door!" ARGH...been there 'meself'!!!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/10/2003
Dear Anita, Excellent Write as always!

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tony
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 3/10/2003
hmm...spectacular. You have a way of expression that I enjoy immensely.
Amor
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/10/2003
This was a great message! Just love these lines:

So ask me not for promises I fear I may not keep
Accept my words and actions, I've set in easy reach

oh yeah..excellent!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 3/10/2003
Lady this is a very nice write. I like it!
Jack
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/10/2003
Well expressed.
Someone told me one time that 'duck bites' didn't hurt, but all those little pieces add up.

~E
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/10/2003
Lady A~ Oh yea been at this party before. Dont ya hate it....
Excellent write.
Peg
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