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| Reviewed by Amy Hawke |
3/13/2003 |
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this is beautiful Richard
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/12/2003 |
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Just love these lines:
dreams
lingering
on the edge of
belief.
So powerful and moving,
Lovely,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/12/2003 |
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| Dreams can be on the edge of belief. Some are too much a reflection of our daily life. Excellent poem. |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/12/2003 |
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| Just when I thought I knew what this meant, a whole new set of thoughts about it popped up. I will ponder this one all day, and that, Richard, is a compliment. Neat Job! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/12/2003 |
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| Richard I agree. A few words, but a lot of meaning. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Linda Murray |
3/11/2003 |
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| So few words but such big meanings. Wonderful one tonight. Thanks ~Linda~ |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
3/11/2003 |
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Richard,
You packed some strong imagery in very few words! Those are the one's that linger! I'd say this is poetic perfection!
Hugs,
Maria
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
3/11/2003 |
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beautiful, damn...'dreams lingering on the edge of belief'...yes, fervor, that lingering on that edge, aching, passionately needed dreams like this, this poem is as a dream...one just...just feels it. the 'fervor'/the 'lingering on the edge...'
the 'births'
got to me, this one, perfect poem
... as a poet dreams, as a human being 'dreams', god, richard..awed, bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/11/2003 |
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Very nice richard check the moon for me if you go out on the baby tonight. I love this poem
Peg |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/11/2003 |
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Neat and concise, Richard.
Wrote another Vampyre for you.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/11/2003 |
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| Hmmmm. this is a puzzle.. I know what each line means..but I cannot put the puzzle together...the sky forms into a solid mass, gives birth,in new form,dreams linger..on the edge of belief..is it that it simply means what it means...or is there a hidden meaning that I cant see...Floria |
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