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Surreal
by Steve Patterson

Wednesday, March 12, 2003

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it all feels
Surreal
this deal
of tryin' ta' heal

tryin' not ta' steal
away into the night
tryin' ta' stay
in the light

wantin' ta' swim
ta' the bottom
of a glass
thinkin' 'bout you & him
the blue's i gottem'
but i know they'll pass

waitin' for loved ones ta' die
tryin' not ta' ask
why
tryin' ta' be up ta' the task
tryin' not ta' cry

it all feels
Surreal
this deal
of learnin' ta' feel






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Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/12/2003
yes learning to feel again is quite surreal awesomelly short and to the point nice job on this fantastic poem
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 3/12/2003
This was cute...I could almost feel your ice melting :) Teresa
Reviewed by Leysa Lowery 3/12/2003
You speak 'ta truth!
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