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My Dark Knight
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Wednesday, March 12, 2003

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He comes for me,
In the dark of night,
Like a shadow
Passing over the moon...
Peering in my window,
Knowing I am awake;
And waiting...

He calls to me,
Beacons for me to follow-
And I cannot resist him,
Never deny him...
His love, his need,
Mine to fulfill...

My Dark Knight,
So black against the sun,
Filling me with his cruel love-
Whispering in my ear,
Telling me I have nothing to fear;
As long as I love him,
Never leave him,
Crushing me to his chest...
Now pressing his harsh lips to mine,
Making me tingle inside.

How did you find me?
What force brought us together?
That you and I fit one to another
Like pieces in a puzzle...

My future so dark in the shadows...

How long must I endure
The fear of losing you to the Void...
The cutting and bleeding you seem to need,
As much as you need me-
The fear of being left alone,
In the dark,
Once again...

Better to endure the agony of your love,
The pain of your touching,
Then to feel nothing,
And become once again,
The stone statue you found
In the Garden of my soul...
Come my Dark Knight,
And make me forget again,
Make me believe in love once more,
Before you walk out the door...
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Reviewed by Dark Knight 7/7/2007
Lovely words and title :-)
Reviewed by A PAX 3/13/2003
Oh I love this!!!!!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/12/2003
Well never knows about the shadows.
Reviewed by Larry Skahill 3/12/2003
ah life in the shadows
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/12/2003
Excellent dark write,love comes in many forms... we are on the same page tonight;-)of shadows...
Reviewed by Netta Jack 3/12/2003
Sound like fantasy meets reality. GREAT WRITE!!!!
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/12/2003
it very turmoiled and sad tobe in a relationship which you dont want but this was a very dark and sad poem since that spoke about that subject you did an awesome job on this fantastic poem
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/12/2003
A very emotional piece, so beautifully written.
Chrissie x
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/12/2003
real nice write
Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels 3/12/2003
Love this poem, trapped in love, forced to be with him

great poem
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/12/2003
beautifully written...this is a treasure! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. love the ending best..."make me believe in love once more/before you walk out the door"...outstanding!
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader) 3/12/2003
I read another poem of yours today. I hope you find your Dark Knight, little lady.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 3/12/2003
This reminds me of a fish without fins that can't swim. Great emotion in here. Teresa
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/12/2003
An interesting write,
well written.

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