My Dark Knight
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Wednesday, March 12, 2003
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He comes for me,
In the dark of night,
Like a shadow
Passing over the moon...
Peering in my window,
Knowing I am awake;
He calls to me,
Beacons for me to follow-
And I cannot resist him,
Never deny him...
His love, his need,
Mine to fulfill...
My Dark Knight,
So black against the sun,
Filling me with his cruel love-
Whispering in my ear,
Telling me I have nothing to fear;
As long as I love him,
Never leave him,
Crushing me to his chest...
Now pressing his harsh lips to mine,
Making me tingle inside.
How did you find me?
What force brought us together?
That you and I fit one to another
Like pieces in a puzzle...
My future so dark in the shadows...
How long must I endure
The fear of losing you to the Void...
The cutting and bleeding you seem to need,
As much as you need me-
The fear of being left alone,
In the dark,
Better to endure the agony of your love,
The pain of your touching,
Then to feel nothing,
And become once again,
The stone statue you found
In the Garden of my soul...
Come my Dark Knight,
And make me forget again,
Make me believe in love once more,
Before you walk out the door...
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|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Lovely words and title :-)|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh I love this!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Well written...one never knows about the shadows.|
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
|ah life in the shadows|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent dark write,love comes in many forms... we are on the same page tonight;-)of shadows...|
|Reviewed by Netta Jack
|Sound like fantasy meets reality. GREAT WRITE!!!!|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|it very turmoiled and sad tobe in a relationship which you dont want but this was a very dark and sad poem since that spoke about that subject you did an awesome job on this fantastic poem|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A very emotional piece, so beautifully written.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|real nice write|
|Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels
|Love this poem, trapped in love, forced to be with him
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|beautifully written...this is a treasure! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. love the ending best..."make me believe in love once more/before you walk out the door"...outstanding!|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
|I read another poem of yours today. I hope you find your Dark Knight, little lady.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|This reminds me of a fish without fins that can't swim. Great emotion in here. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|An interesting write,