|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Nice__You Got It Out & Off Your(mind) Chest!
|Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
|Really loved the opening, the meter of those first four lines really drags the reader in. Great write. Mal.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|We can miss but not let them mess.
Good one, Susan.
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|it is so sweet to miss a person yet it is so hard to admit it nice job on this fantastic poem|
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|it is a sad longing...
|Reviewed by Morchuis
Strange fact of life, sad but sometimes very true for some people.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent as always Susan...Good when you can be honest about it;-)|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|this touched me and i've been alone for years. relatively speaking. at least i haven't missed anyone like this in years|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|"I say I can forget you...
But to think this is to lie...
It goes with "I don't miss you"..
And punctuated sighs"
this is so true, but lots of us won't admit it.
This is a good one Susan
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|I miss you in the Summer
when the Robins call,
I miss you in the winter
when the snowflakes fall,
I miss you in the darkness
when I'm alone
I will miss you always
oh please come home,
For I can't tolerate
Don't you ever miss me?
You poem Susan tickled my muset
and I just felt these words were true.
I could not tolerate loss
the way you do,
And there is someone
I miss deeply
just like you.
Bill hugs ....