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The vision, of loveliness,
Before my eyes,
Is what I share,
With my heart and soul.
I find you,
In my, every thought,
In my dreams,
I first, taste your lips.
To hold you, in my arms,
To feel, our hearts,
Beating as one,
Is more, than a man,
Could ever stand.
To whisper sensuously,
in your ear,
In the softness, of the night,
Love, must be treated right.
True Love,
Is not, just words,
True Love,
Is an eternal commitment,
Descended from above.
By: William Bonilla......9/23/03
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
3/13/2003 |
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Gorgeous words William...they move the soul.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
3/13/2003 |
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| This was a religious work. |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/13/2003 |
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| How did you manage to survive the "I take what I want" mentality so prevelent in our society? Such a giving set of verses. Wonderfully written. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/12/2003 |
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Excellent, as always a beautiful and well versed poem!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
3/12/2003 |
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like Eileen said...divine...
beautifully said... |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
3/12/2003 |
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| You are right. Beautiful poetry |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/12/2003 |
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| fabulous! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/12/2003 |
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My, how lovely your words.
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/12/2003 |
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| Excellent at telling it like it is..... |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
3/12/2003 |
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Beautiful write William!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by J. Wise |
3/12/2003 |
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"In the softness, of the night,"
great poem. loved this line. wonderful emotion.
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
3/12/2003 |
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William,
You are blessed with true love. Excellent write.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll |
3/12/2003 |
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| I believe!!!!! William, excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/12/2003 |
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True Love knows no pain.
Thank you for this verse. You know I love poems like these.
Love and peace,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/12/2003 |
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| divine beauty William! well done;-) |
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