|lovely noir poem.|
|speaks to all of the senses...and spirit|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|perfect tempo, Richard...well done!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|you got tha beat......of distant drums....very nice on my musical ear this one
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|tempo ...yes, drumbeat-like to me/and painful/captures the pain of...the 'forgotten...' & fells as if...IT IS...
the stolen soul
perfectly written, damn..
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
the stolen soul "
there seems to be a lot of regret in these lines richard...
lights...." I hope you do recall the light..find it again...keep it in your heart...great poem...even if I read it wrong..always strong powerful words come from your soul..Floria
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved the rythmn of this poem! Just rocks!
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|ah beautiful pounding beat!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Richard, this is good. I just did some research on voodoo and Marie Laveau of New Orleans for a book. I can hear the drums in your poem.