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Our True Love For Us
by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Friday, March 14, 2003

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She leant against my wide shoulder;
the divine insignia of loverís shelter
then closed her eyes and took a nap
amid the long-drawn-out semi light.

I whispered a spongy tune in her ear
She listened with a jolly countenance
I told her of the love and its dynamism
Happily she nodded with appreciation

I breathed in her ear, the air of fresh love,
Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us

Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life

She moaned with pity and everlasting delight
She grasped me and held me tightly as in fright
She gazed me with those anxious bright eyes
Then I heard her breathe my name aloud

I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble



Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Linda Hill 3/15/2003
You have a Loving and Romantic
heart, my friend. May you and
your love always feel this way.
Love n Luck :)
Reviewed by A PAX 3/15/2003
Straight from the heart of a tender devoted lover.....to his woman

so intimate and loving

you got me sighing!!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
and then some more!!!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/15/2003
Oh! Bhuwan this is the most amazing part......you are a real REAL GENTLE MAN...this came from the Gods of heaven my friend
Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/15/2003
that was so beautiful nice job on this fantastic poem
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/15/2003
An absolutely beautiful verse. Wonderful.
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader) 3/15/2003
I breathed in her ear, the air of fresh love,
"Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us"

Fantastic!!!
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal 3/15/2003
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she -
the rhythm of my life

These verses are a killer....its a beautiful poem!!!
~Shezz
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 3/14/2003
Bhuwan, this is beautiful, graceful and wonderfully written. Such true love in such a crazy world, how refreshing.
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza 3/14/2003
makes me wish that all men should be poets like you... :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/14/2003
Bhuwan,beauty of verse with noble sentiments of true love ...Well done again!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/14/2003
{{{BHUWAN}}}}}}}}}
"I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble "
THIS IS LOVEA {{and you capture it so well every word.}}}}
Hugs n luck my friend bravo Peggy
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/14/2003
Hi Bhuwan, Wow you are on some winning streak my friend. Another winning, and great writing.


ty
tony
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/14/2003
Absolutely beautiful, smooth, gentle, glaced with pure love

William
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/14/2003
Sweet one to read.
~E
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/14/2003
This was so lovely, just a joy to read, like a song playing in my heart...just love these lines:

And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble

Beautiful,

Reindeer
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