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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
3/15/2003 |
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You have a Loving and Romantic
heart, my friend. May you and
your love always feel this way.
Love n Luck :) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/15/2003 |
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Straight from the heart of a tender devoted lover.....to his woman
so intimate and loving
you got me sighing!!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
and then some more!!! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/15/2003 |
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Oh! Bhuwan this is the most amazing part......you are a real REAL GENTLE MAN...this came from the Gods of heaven my friend
Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life
Love
Tinka
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
3/15/2003 |
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| that was so beautiful nice job on this fantastic poem |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/15/2003 |
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| An absolutely beautiful verse. Wonderful. |
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| Reviewed by Madame X |
3/15/2003 |
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I breathed in her ear, the air of fresh love,
"Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us"
Fantastic!!!
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| Reviewed by Shezray Faisal |
3/15/2003 |
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Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she -
the rhythm of my life
These verses are a killer....its a beautiful poem!!!
~Shezz
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/14/2003 |
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| Bhuwan, this is beautiful, graceful and wonderfully written. Such true love in such a crazy world, how refreshing. |
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| Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza |
3/14/2003 |
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| makes me wish that all men should be poets like you... :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/14/2003 |
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| Bhuwan,beauty of verse with noble sentiments of true love ...Well done again! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/14/2003 |
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{{{BHUWAN}}}}}}}}}
"I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble "
THIS IS LOVEA {{and you capture it so well every word.}}}}
Hugs n luck my friend bravo Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
3/14/2003 |
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Hi Bhuwan, Wow you are on some winning streak my friend. Another winning, and great writing.
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tony |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/14/2003 |
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Absolutely beautiful, smooth, gentle, glaced with pure love
William |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/14/2003 |
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Sweet one to read.
~E |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/14/2003 |
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This was so lovely, just a joy to read, like a song playing in my heart...just love these lines:
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble
Beautiful,
Reindeer |
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