|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Sally Odgers
|very nice - especially the last two lines.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
A wonderful write,
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh what a lovely picture you have painted here! Just beautiful,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sounds like fun, Chester.
I flew a kite last year. Loads of fun.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|lovely sentimental piece takes me back to summer days in the park with my kids;-) Thanks Chester...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Oh Chester I love the part about the sun melting like a lollipop and the rhyme is excellent.