|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Knock .......knock......loved the write it's raining poems from your pen keep up the talent !|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You brought very old memories back to me Dundeeman....psst!! I still have those piggy's locked up in my backyard.....hehehe
waiting for them to get nice and fat for easter time.....Okay! that was not funny....but they do taste nice on a open fire.....tjops and spareribs....very nice don't you think
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is one of your best! Great write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Ghad top of the list for this one...your best...a lot of winners for you
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent flow, style and content...|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|quite enjoyable though sometimes it is hard to read your work. It might be nicer if you paragraphed it. Otherwise good write.
Have you ever read howl? i think it would touch you. If not i can send you a copy
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|i love this, chad...i also want an autographed copy of your book! *applause* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Chad, I want an autographed copy of the book. Bill is right, this one should have a wide audience. Your growth has been phonominal.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Growing up is hard to do.....leave the fantasy, but keep the romance
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Chad you are becoming better and better. Every poem you write adds to your talent and BOY, You are gonna be great sooner than you expect !!!
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|"Fantasy is but
The shattered glass slipper
Crushed by the reality
Of this cold uncaring world"
Emotions so powerfully expressed in this!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|sad write, chad, but very well done! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) to you, chad! :)|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|What !!! Snow White still sleeps. There wasn't a prince to kiss. Now I'm depressed!
[smiles] Good one, Chad. You have a fascinating mind.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|P.P. outstanding piece. I'm with Bill on this one. He gives you excellent advice.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A nother excellent piece Chad, reflecting your sadness.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I love this one all of my favorite stories and chaacters, The glass slipper crashed with reality.
Excellent job here chad.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Chad....this is lovely and sad at the same time...excellent write...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Chad this is really great. This poemis well enough writeen to be included in your first book of poetry. Strieve to maintain this level. But don't ever force your poetry to fit in a book of poems. Don't accept anything that does not turn you on. Bill|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|So lovely and sad! Loved this poem, These lines:
Between you and me
It's but a dream
Of a fantasy
That is blowing away
With the kiss
Of another lover's lips.
Just so poignant,