|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Thanks for the letter Red. It was great. I would have loved to have gotten a letter like this from my father. Out of the 53 years I've been living I only got one letter from him. And the only reason I got this was because I wrote him. He was only a sperm donor. tkcare Grady|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Red, I hope that you will one day get to show this to your real children, the ones you envisioned here. As this is an excellent poem and sage advice.
Most especially this part:
"for lending you to me,
for entrusting you to me"
because this is what is most important about what you will teach them:
"My son, do not be greedy for power
but be greedy for knowledge.
My daughter, do not lust for jewels,
but surround yourself with gems of wisdom."
Best of luck in your quest to off-spring.
|Reviewed by Janie Tijerina
|Tears of joy as I read this poem.
How blessed your children will be.
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|can you be our dad? :)|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Save this poem Red and maybe some day in the near future you will find your beloved, and both of you will be able to share your wisdom with your own children as the grow and you bask in their splendor. Be thankful you are so young and can make this a reality for you and for them someday. But for now, it is an excellent projection of how you would like to be treated. Isn't it? Bill|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|this is such a sweet poem with such sweet tenderness awesoem job on this|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful poem with a great message. Good work!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|great advice from a loving father... really well written...|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Very nice! You are on the right track to raising wonderful well respected kids.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|This is a 'gem' of wisdom for any age...|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|My Friend..this is incredible!
You have me speechless and in
tears. Your words of wisdom
should be up on bulletin boards
everywhere...especially in hospital
maternity wards. You have written
a masterpiece, my friend.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow, neat letter to kids or anybody.
Kudos...glad I stopped by.