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Exodus
by Eroica Mendoza

Sunday, March 16, 2003

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I値l be away
Find me if you wish
In the mountains
I play with the trees
Keeping me abreast
With the world.

I値l be away
Find me if you must
In the ocean
I dance with the waves
Keeping me alive
Even in tears.

I値l be away
Find me if you can
In heaven
I sing with the angels
Keeping me safe
From bleeding pain.

I値l be away
Find me if you will
In your heart
Where I now dwell
Keeping me close
To you forever

Forgive me my dear
For going away
Today I leave
I won稚 be far
The memories I keep
In your arms where I used to rest
When you hold me tight
Your soulful kisses
Each moment our bodies commune
I take them with me
Find me if you care
Seek me in spirit
Love me always
In your heart
I stay

Remember I did love you



*Photograph taken by me Jan 2003
Sunset by the Manila Bay, Philippines

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Reviewed by Sable Esp 1/11/2011
another good one, I'd bet they are all --- Sable Esp
Reviewed by Micha Julian 3/20/2003
beautiful, sadly so dreamlike, yet very, very real...you, Erica, known pain and give beauty, a gift, and so wondrous that you share...and to me, layers within this, could be intensely personal love poem, intensely personal, soul share, and cultural, exodus from insanity...oh, all with much shared soul....and oh, the beauty, you...just, so special this, thank YOU!
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 3/19/2003
Great photo!
And a wonderful poem which is amazing!
Reviewed by Bret Herholz (Reader) 3/18/2003
You don't know what you got, till you lose it.

I know it's corny to quote songs, but that's the emotion that I feel when reading this piece.

Brilliant.
Reviewed by Sara Cunningham 3/17/2003
beautiful
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 3/17/2003
you did a great job with this poem
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 3/17/2003
... your goodbye makes me realize how very much we should treasure each moment, day, and especially, each relatioship. lovely work!
Reviewed by J John (Reader) 3/16/2003
Much enjoyed :) J & J
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/16/2003
both poem and pic are superb...beautifully done Erica;-)!
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 3/16/2003
Beautiful poetry
And I have a photograph that I took that looks just like yours LOVE IT!
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 3/16/2003
I love the repetitions. Excellent poem
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 3/16/2003
This is really beautiful, and your photo is stunning!!!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/16/2003
Sweet one. Great pic.
~E
Reviewed by Trixie Love 3/16/2003
Absolutely beautiful..

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/16/2003
So stunning and beautiful Erica.
Peg
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/16/2003
This was so beautiful, so very lovely and heart-felt,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/16/2003
Erica,

Absolute wonderful...great write...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ョ 3/16/2003
I feel your soul in this. And the photo is magnificent. ~Joseph
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/16/2003
Inspiring... "Exodus" is an inspiring masterpiece!



I have enjoyed a poem that responds to Poetry. I have digested in full and have learned from it.



I Salute the Author with Accolades of my heart.



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/16/2003
Awesome Erica just awesome.....the pic also..
The write I need to send to someone I love......know the feeling......
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/16/2003
Erica, you poetry is beautiful. The picure you used is also stunning. Bill
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/16/2003
Erica,
Absolutely lovely.

Chrissie
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