|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Fabulous writing piece|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|very peaceful write....calming I think
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|I could "feel" the night moving in Richard.Paradoxes between life and death..great line...stars fall in journeys...of fates intent...very poetic but also very deep..good work here..Floria|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
You do amaze me with your ability to create so much, by saying so little! I enjoyed this one very much!
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|What a great way of expressing this emotion...I felt the tugging of the passing constellations in this way each time that I look up into the sky. Even as the world turns, the universe continues by as I feel our insignificance in comparison to these great works and creations.
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|oh, god, this, moving, gentle, special, very special, this one...the 'stars falling', all of it...and this:
to the soul"
(i want to be 'sleeping' this way, i think-- i do, the paradoxes, though are so, well, just as you spoke--of life, death...much beauty/aches with a longing...for me, it slowly falls down the page as if into a dream...) again your soul bared, again, richard, ah, damn, am in awe!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful, lovely poem,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Lovely one Richard.