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Our Maiden Voyage
by Paul Berube

Wednesday, March 19, 2003

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I swallow your thoughts
tasting sweet creation
intoxicating my soul
awakening desire

Reaching
to breathe your scent
and fill the emptiness
void of sated moments

Tempting he who sails
within the
sea of peace
massaging his crown
of passion

With slow gyration
gently bringing
completion
to our maiden voyage.

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 1/19/2008
Paul,
This is beautifully done with the use of metaphors. Bravo!
Sheila
Reviewed by Sharon Masters (Reader) 3/19/2003
Wow ... captivating and very sensual ...
Very Nice!

\sharon\
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/19/2003
Lovely write.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/19/2003
What a lovely sweet poem this was!

Beautiful!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/19/2003
Paul, I searched your poems for The Struggle and was unable to locate it. I wrote that poem for somebody I have never met before,,as a favor to another friend of theirs. If you will send me your poem I would love to read it,,,Lisa
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 3/19/2003
Top- of the class
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/19/2003
Erotic class, wonderful poem, Paul.
Reviewed by john zimmerman 3/19/2003
understated, sensual
well done

john+
Reviewed by Linda Hill 3/19/2003
Sensual write Paul..
This deserves a second
read...and a third..
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/19/2003
This was Great, Paul.
Great Verse!


tony
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