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Dream Recorder
by SilverCeltic Moon

Thursday, March 20, 2003

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When such a device is made.....

Silly as it sounds and seems
I get my best thoughts from my dreams.

I wish there were a way to record
these slumbering thoughts in perfect accord

from the way they came across in the nightÖ
to reveal them as clearly in daylight.

By the morning they are disjointed and unclear
it makes me want to rant and rave rather than cheer.

I have a great story line in full and impeccable detail,
but by the time Iím fully awake, itís lost in the gray veil.

Stories of love gone wrong and bad:
tearful scenes with such depths of sad;

tales of parting of such sweet sorrow.
A dream recorder I would love to borrow!

~sigh~ So, until such a device is made
I will sit here sadly in the bed Iíve made.

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/11/2008
Thanks for telling us your wishes for a dream recorder. Dreams are so profound sometime and should be recorded. Many we remember and do have a chance to analyze them, but some we don't remember.
I have heard dreams mean lots and can be analyzed by someone including yourself. Keep track of them and see a pattern.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/21/2003
Silver, excellent poem.Too bad there wasn't a way to record our dreams. Many times we dreams and forget the details which are most important. Excellent thoughts.
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 3/20/2003
Catchy, and true. Good job.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/20/2003
Excellent, yes write it down........
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/20/2003
This was so lovely! But then all your poetry is beautiful! Loving your poetry here,

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/20/2003
Me too Celtic..this was the digital..floria
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/20/2003
This is really beautiful.
Reviewed by jude forese 3/20/2003
begin a dream diary... as soon as you awake, jot down whatever you can remember... day by day, your power to recall will become stronger... by the way, excellent write...
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 3/20/2003
I'm sure that's what makes some of my days start out good or bad....if only, huh?
Thank you,
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/20/2003
I would love to have one of those devices! I like you will be glad when they appear on the shelves for sale! Great write! Lisa
Reviewed by Leysa Lowery 3/20/2003
So true, so true. Nice right
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/20/2003
Nicely done.
Dreamy picture too.
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 3/20/2003
Neat! I really enjoyed this one also!
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