|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Your emotions are coming forth and showing with this write. You must be a very passionate person and love life. Writing these things takes thought and l0ngings come to be fulfilled for you.|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Speak forth your heart my brave friend, speak forth the part that lies the deepest, and quietest hid.
Rodney Evan Bohen
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"These Chains". This poem says it in full. It is love in action "flaming desire that burns" to create the unity of eternity in the moment of the emotion.
I have enjoyed its simplicity of greatness.
I Salute the Author.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|William you write so powerfully from the heart...love this..floria|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i think your chains have been broken...|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Incredible write, my friend.
Vivid emotions and heartfelt
love. Awesome write!!!
Your Friend, Linda :)
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hey William, Excellent!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so soft and lovely, just so wonderful William! Loving your poetry here!
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|William, A very longing poem sweetly expressed
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|As the oceans are blue....
This is a very good write too
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
A heartfelt and a beautiful expression of longing.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sweet one, William.
Enjoyed reading it.