Friday, March 21, 2003
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Some people don't care what they say,
you're just a small part of their day,
and you might cry, but it's okay,
they don't see where you lost your way.
Some people say they love you true ,
and you think that they're lying too,
and then you find they really do,
they really mean that they love you.
Some people care, but they don't show,
and in the end, you never know,
but broken hearts are how we grow,
we have no choice, but to let go.
Some girl I know, her time she bides,
and waits until you close your eyes,
and softly sits alone and cries,
and no-one sees her self-despise.
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|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|Wonderful poem! Sad, but true, I wish we could all just say what we really mean and let each other know what we feel inside. ~Kerry|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Truth and radiance shines bright in this poem, Charlotte! Love the rhyme and the idea -- it's so true. You write so brilliantly, girl :)
|Reviewed by Jamez
this is my favouratest poem u ve done, it really moves me and i know thats cheesy feet but thats what its like
xx see u soon twin
|Reviewed by Dan
|Good Poem Charley
Youve Done It Again
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
|Never wait on someone, little lady.
Fine poem you wrote.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Very touching poem and very thoughtful.
I've never worried overly much about 'some' people. I was too busy doing my thing and not waiting for anyone to help me. [smiles]
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Very good this one.
Ane the rhymn
|Reviewed by Jesus
|This is brilliant charl, its really gd :D I luv the rhymin in it 2 - v cleva ;)|